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Spellingmistakes

• Damage should be replaced with damaged, and therefore there is not necessary to consult your doctor with therefore it is not necessary …..
• Do not take these tablets if you are allergic to paracetamol or any (of the) ingredients.

Although I checked my text several times I didn’t notice these mistakes. A bit of a dissapointment, I still need to check my texts better.

Style

I tend to use a slightly  more formal type of speech than the example translation. I believe that both are ok to use.

Words

• Available is a better word for obtainable

These words are not complete synonyms. I should have used available. Obtainable has a similair meaning however it was not completely suitable for this sentence. A good knowledge of the meaning of words is essential.

Capital Letters

Unfortunately I forgot to use capital letters at the beginning of some letter.